
Plague
Daemon was the second book written by Brian Craig, but unlike
Zaragoz, this book is a remarkable disappointment. On the surface,
it shares some similarities with Zaragoz, but in this case the
formula is a disaster. Like Zaragoz, it is a story within a
story, a tale told by a captive Bretonnian entertainer to the
Araby pirate lord holding him. In this book the prologue and
epilogue wherein their relationship is described and which begins
and ends the actual "Plague Daemon" tale is extraneous
and unnecessary and robs the story of what little suspense it
has in the first place.
Plague Daemon also takes place in an unexamined
part of the Old World, the Border Princes, but its treatment
of the Border Princes is implausible, for it introduces us to
the poorly placed "Khyprian Empire". This "empire"
located in the heart of the Border Princes as well as the area's
nomadic and warlike herders of cattle known as the Zani. As
the tale unfolds one gets the feeling that this story could
have been set in any generic fantasy world for there is little
infusion of Old World atmosphere, it could have taken place
in the Dalelands of the Forgotten Realms for Example, or Northern
Gondor in Middle Earth. The locale is bland, tasteless, and
generic.
The main protagonist of the tale spun by Orfeo,
the imprisoned bard, centers on the experience of Harmis Detz,
a remarkably colorless character with whom the reader has the
misfortune of empathizing with. Detz also encounters a whole
series of other characters who are as undeveloped and lacking
in any character as the main character himself. This lack of
personality can be offset by an interesting story, but here
the reader is unlucky as well, the story is a indifferent chase
story: in this case our personality impaired hero is chosen
by fate to hunt down a menacing plague daemon. The entire pursuit
of the plague daemon, around which the novel centers, is not
visceral and exciting, but distant and unendurable. Worse, the
story itself is callous and at times brutal, making reading
this tripe distinctly unpleasant. There isn't a single "human"
moment in the story, nothing that seems authentically warm or
touching.
One of the redeeming things about Zaragoz is one
of its intriguing villains and his philosophy on chaos. But
in this book the plague daemon is little more than uninspired
metaphor for decay and evil, and not necessarily one fitting
even Nurgle. Furthermore the book employs terms "Lazarite"
and katharos that just seem to suggest that the book could very
well have been written as general fantasy and then shoe-horned
into the Warhammer world.
Thus the plot muddles along, furthered by some
muddy devices to justify the importance of the protagonist.
At the heart of the story are some half-baked and poorly articulated
reflections on heroism. Such reflections are trivial and overdone,
poorly executed and excessive. The story within the story ends
in a hopelessly clichéd manner; the epilogue goes even
further in beating the reader senseless with its point while
making the conclusion more saccharine and unpalatable. Adding
insult to injury, my copy of the book repeats the offending
passages twice, presumably a type-setting error, but after reading
the story the skeptic toyed with the thought that it had been
done so as to ensure that the reader didn't miss the point the
author was making.
There is nothing to recommend this book: the "world"
feels wrong, the characters, plot, pacing, its philosophical
and ethical points are trivialized and boorish, and the very
reading of it a most unappetizing experience. If anyone else
finds *anything* redeeming about this book, please tell me,
for I would hate for the three hours I spent reading the book
to be a complete waste.